Wednesday, July 27, 2011

Chapter Five

His POV

I’m treating her breakfast.. or, you can call it brunch, it’s already 10am
I didn’t really expect that she would invite me in her room, I mean who’s on the right mind that will let a stranger in her room? unless she trust me?!

I shook that thought off my head

now that we’re sitting, about to eat our brunch, I stared at her

“how are you doing that?!” I burst out
she just looked at me, confused

“what?” she asked
“how do you use chopsticks?!” I asked
she just chuckled

“if you don‘t know how to use one, why don‘t you just go get a spoon and fork?”
“I want to learn how to use those”

“if you want to, maybe now is not the good idea” she said
“why?!”

“I think you‘re already hungry, I‘ll teach you next time -- umm, that is, if we get to eat again together”
I felt sad about what she said, I don’t know, but somehow I enjoy her company

“okay” then I stood up to get my spoon and fork, she’s still using the chopsticks though

“hey, I don‘t know you‘re name yet” I said
“hmm? my name?”
“yeah, mind telling?”
“umm, I don‘t think it‘s a good idea to know my name”
“huh?! what are you saying? why?”

“I mean, if you wouldn‘t know my name, and I wouldn‘t know yours, our attachment to each other won‘t be that deep, I wouldn‘t care for you that much as to you to me, after our trips together we can forget about each other, just mere strangers who traveled together for a couple of days”

okay ouch, but I get her point, and fine, if that’s what she wants.
now, no ones talking, we’re just both finishing our meals

“why or how did you get separated with your mates?” she suddenly asked
I can’t answer yet, I can’t state the freaking reason

“and why are you alone?” I asked, leading her to another topic
“I‘m here for a friends wedding. you?”
“just touring, why are you alone? don‘t you have a boyfriend or something?”
“I do, but he knows that I‘m with another friend”
“why didn‘t you tell him the truth?”
“he‘ll get mad, he wouldn‘t let me go here, you see he‘s an over protective guy, and kinda strict on me”
“I think you should break up with that kind of guy”
“what?! why did you say so?”

“don‘t let him rule your life, it‘s supposed to be a give and take relationship, not just the other telling the other what to do to his/her life. you‘re a lady need I remind you? you can have your own decisions”

“I see your point, but I love this guy” she said in a low voice

Love. what a sh*t word!
I became quiet
I don’t want to butt in to their relationship, I guess giving advice is the least I can do for her now

“where are you going now by the way?” I asked
“mmm, since we‘re here at Sentosa already, I‘m going at the Universal Studios”
“can I come?” I asked
“sure, I don‘t want to look like a loner in there” she said with a smile
I smiled too, her smile is contagious for goodness sake!

we took a long walk at Boardwalk, and boy do I hate that walk! whew!

smile took over my face as I see the entrance to Universal Studios

“I‘ll go get tickets” she said
“do you want me to go with you?”
“no, it‘s okay if you want to look around for a while..”
“okay, I‘ll be back as soon as you got the tickets”

I saw a chocolate factory-like shop not that far, boy do I love chocolates, so I entered.

ooohhhhh!! heaven! I’m looking for some Hershey’s chocolates, and I see them at the other end of the shop.

there are souvenir shelves that I passed through, and one person always pops to my mind while looking at them

after I think 10mins of just strolling around the shop, I went out to look for Her

she already got the tickets so we went in

she’s walking in front of me and I’m just following her wherever she goes
while looking at her, I can’t help my self but observe her, she’s kind of a delicate, fragile, sensitive --

*snap snap*

“huh?”
“day dreaming?” she asked with a smirk on her face
“no way” I answered, I can feel my face warm, damn this
“really?” she asked again with that playful smile on her lips
“really!” I answered
“okay, sabi mo eh.. bahala ka dyan, sundan mo ko buong araw”
what did she said?! seriously! can I get a translator here or something?!

she suddenly turned left so I followed her again

“ang bagal mo naman!”
“what?!” I asked a bit irritated
“ay, sorry naman, I said you walk too slow” then she grabbed my hand

*lub-dub lub-dub lub-dub* 
[a/c: okay you know the drill people.. that‘s a heartbeat.. sorta kind of a heartbeat? yeah deal with it, I can‘t make a real heartbeat sound.. haha, and why am I speaking in English? pft >.<]

okay, so what the hell is this pounding in my chest?

the last time I felt this is -- I was with Jestine

Jestine is my girlfriend -- ex girlfriend to be precise -- she dumped me -- over the phone ..

from that moment on, I don’t know what to do with my life anymore, so end up at the bridge attempting to kill myself.. which is kind of stupid of me cause I know how to swim.. I’m an idiot, I know.

why did she dump me? well cause --

what the?! someone’s poking me???

“what the hell do you think you‘re doing?”

“I thought -- I mean you‘re not talking, not responding, you‘re just staring at the blank air, you‘re even letting me drag you around! I thought you turned into a zombie” she said with that freaking smile of hers

“weirdo!” is my only answer

“sus, ako pa daw ang weirdo.. sya kaya tong nakatulala sa kawalan”
“I can‘t understand what you‘re saying, don‘t you think it‘s kind of unfair?”
“nope” she said then she dragged me again

I hate you, you little dwarf-like creature! girl! You! urgh!
I wish I could just squeeze you, you’re so little yet you drag me like a broom!!

we’re waiting here, at the long long long!!! line to who knows where!
actually it’s like a castle

I hear commotion, I was ignoring it till this crazy girl here slapped my arm!!
“hey look!! it‘s Shrek and Fiona!!” she said pointing at those two characters

“I wish to be like Fiona” she said dreamingly, dude that made my eyebrow raised
“and why in the world would like to be like her?”
“cause she found true love”
“what?! that‘s crazy talk! why, is your ‘prince’ isn‘t enough for you?” I said with small laughs in between

she rolled her eyes then turned her back on me

“you know a girl can always dream”

oww, wrong choice of words again.

“anyway, where are we going again?”
“in their castle” she answered
“who‘s castle? Shrek and Fiona?”
“yep, so just wait okay! you‘re so annoying”
“oh yeah?”

then I went in front of her
she’s looks up to me, well you know she smaller than me so yeah.

I’m staring at her
she looked at the other way but I’m still staring at her

Saturday, July 23, 2011

Chapter Four

bumangon ako, tinignan ko yung oras..

1:03am

“tsk!”

bumaba ako sa lobby, nakita ko yung lalakeng kinaiinisan ko

bago ko sya lapitan kinausap ko muna yung receptionist

“can you send an extra mattress in my room? room 312 please. just leave it on the floor. thank you”
“sure ma‘am, umm ma‘am are you sure what you‘re about to do?”

napangiwi ako sa tanong nya, hindi ko din naman kasi alam kung sigurado ba ako sa gagawin kong to.. eee! bahala na nga si batman!

“good luck ma‘am” bulong nya saken, tapos unti unti kong nilapitan yung lalake kanina

paglapit ko sa kanya, tulog na sya..
tinignan ko yung receptionist, eee! anu ba naman tong napasok ko

“uhh, hey, mister?” tapos tinusok ko yung braso nya
tinignan ko na naman yung receptionist.. waaaaaaaa tulungan mo ako teh!

“hey” niyugyog ko na yung braso nya, pero hindi padin sya gumigising
“mister?!” nilakasan ko yung pag uga sa kanya

asan sya ngayon? andito sa couch sa lobby, couch lang ha? hindi sofa, as in naka upo syang natutulog at kawawang kawawa itsura nya!

“heeyy!” tapos tinulak ko na sya ng malakas, pft! kanina pa ha! kanina pa!

bigla na lang sya tumayo kaya nagulat ako

*lub-dub lub-dub lub-dub lub-dub* [a/c: isipin nyo na lang mabilis na heartbeat yan.. -_-]

napasinghap ako sa lapit namin, space! space!! I need space! umatras ako ng dalawang hakbang palayo sa kanya, sya naman nag iwas ng tingin

“sorry” sabi nya, then he run his fingers through his hair, oooohhh! >,< that’s .. ehem I need to calm my self
“sure”

“uhh, anyway why did you come here?” tanong nya tapos tumingin sa relo nya
“hey, its already 1:10, why are you still awake?” wow concern citizen si kuya?

“umm, I.. would like to invite you at my room.. -- but don‘t think of it as uhh.. -- asar! kailangan ko pang mag paliwanag sa isang to.. tsk! -- I mean don‘t get me wrong okay?”

“why did you suddenly change your mind?”
“I pity you” tapos tumingin ako sa malayo, di naman talaga eh, ewan ko ba feeling ko kasi may kung anong humahatak na saken para tulungan ang mokong na to..

“really?” tapos ngumiti sya
napasimangot ako, bakit parang may meaning yung tanong at ngiti nya?

“if you don‘t want, it‘s fine with me..”
“opps, sorry. okay, I accept your offer AND thank you” tapos ngumiti uli sya saken.. kyaaaaaaaaaaaa >///<

patawarin mo ako Christian!

sino si Christian? sya lang naman ang pinaka mamahal kong boyfriend.. opo, hindi na po ako single..

nag roll eyes na lang ako tapos pinasunod ko sya
tinignan ko yung receptionist nung nadaanan namin sya.. pft, isa din to, ang weird makangiti!

binuksan ko yung pinto ng kwarto, andito na yung pinadala kong kutson

“you sle--”

“hhhhaaahhhh!” tapos tumalon sya sa kama

“hey! no, you‘ll stay down here!” tapos tinuro ko yung kutson sa lapag

tumayo uli sya, tapos ang lapit na naman namin, nakakainis!! hindi ako makahinga ng maayos!
too close dude! too close!! >///<

ngumiti sya habang magkaharap kami tapos umiwas na uli sya saka humiga sa baba

humiga na din ako sa kama ko, tapos pinatay ko na din yung ilaw sa tabi ng kama ko
nakapikit ako, pero ayaw matulog ng diwa ko..

“Thank you” bigla ko na lang narinig tapos napangiti ako


Coz I love her with all that I am and my voice shakes along with my hands yes she's all that I see and she's all that I need and I'm out of my league once again

naalimpungatan ako sa narinig ko, ang ganda nung boses, ang lamig sa tenga, pero di padin ako dumidilat.. pakiramdam ko kasi nananaginip lang ako

You watch the season pull up its own stakes and catch the last weekend of the last week before the gold and the glamour have been replaced, another sun soaked season fades away

nagiba yung tono nung kanta, iba na ata

biglang tumahimik kaya dahan dahan na akong nagmulat

“morning” narinig ko agad na bati saken
bumangon ako, pero hindi pa din tumatayo sa kama “morning” sagot ko din

naka upo sya dun sa parang salas nitong kwarto

“did I woke you up?” tanong nya
“were you the one singing?” tanong ko naman
“yeah, so did I woke you?”
“no, not really”

wow, mukhang maganda ang simula ng araw ko ah, di sya nang iinis
“cool, so can you take a shower now? I‘m kinda hungry already, unless you intend to sleep all day?”

spoke too soon

tumayo na ako, at kumuha ng damit ko saka pumasok sa banyo

paglabas ko, nanunuod sya ng TV

“hey, finally.. where do you want to eat?” tanong nya agad, wow libre ba nya? kung makatanong!
“why? are you going to treat me?” biro ko
“sure! I just need to exchange my Australian dollar to Singapore ones”
“really?!” na excite naman ako! hindi ako gagastos ngayon ng agahan
“I mean it, come on..”

hmm, may kapalit kaya tong libre nya saken? wala naman na siguro niligtas ko kaya sya. kahit ayaw nya

“where are we going?” tanong ko
“we‘ll exchange this baby first” tapos pinakita nya wallet nya, edi sige ikaw na mayaman! pft

“umm, would you mind paying for my ride first? if it‘s okay” tanong nya
“okay”

naglalakad na kami ngayon papuntang bus stop

“you know I think you should go to another hotel, or a different location maybe” bigla na lang nyang sabi
“why?” tanong ko naman
“is yesterday your first night here?” balik na tanong naman nya, ano to walang sagot sa mga tanong?
“yeah, why?”

“figures.. last night when you left me at the lobby, while looking outside, I kinda explore the venue of your hotel.. it‘s in a ‘red district’ area if you know what I mean” sabi nya

ano daw? di ko nagets..

“you don‘t know what that means?” tanong nya nung hindi ako sumagot
umiling lang ako

lumapit sya saken, as in yung mas malapit pa kesa kagabi.. >///<
inilapit nya bibig nya sa tenga ko, saka bumulong saken

O__O eeeehhhh?! di nga?! lilipat na ako mamaya pag uwi namin!!

lumayo sya “here‘s the bus” sabi nya, saka lang ako natauhan

magkatabi kami ngayon, walang nagsasalita
pero di tulad kahapon, hindi na ako ganun ka-ilang sa kanya

medyo malayo ang Joo Chiat sa mga shopping area, parang malayo sa kabihasnan kumbaga

andito na kami ngayon sa mall malapit sa Marina’s Bridge, kung saan kami nagkakilala ng buang na to
nagpapapalit na sya ng pera nya, nagugutom na ako! bilis!!

“let‘s go” sabi nya nung nakatabi na uli sya saken
di ako umiimik, feeling ko kasi, konti pa manonose bleed na ako sa isang to, grabe naman kasi ang accent!
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Tuesday, July 19, 2011

Chapter Three

His POV

“You! Seriously, are you a crazy person or something?” she asked
“what? No!” I’m not a crazy guy, you crazy girl!
“then why are you following me?”
“cause, I don‘t know here” I confessed
“so you‘re here alone?” even her eyebrow raised. pft!
“no, actually I‘m in a group.. but since, umm, I got separated from them” I can’t tell her the reason..
“where are they?” she suddenly asked, does she want to get rid of me?

“I don‘t know”
“how about contacting them? do you know their number?”
“yes, but I don‘t think I may be able to contact them”
“why not?”
“different country, different cell phone signal. duh” is she .. nah, never mind

“wow pilosopo, what I mean is their contact number here” seriously, I hate it when she speaks Tagalog is it? yeah, what if she’s saying mean words to me? I wouldn’t know right?

“oh! umm, wait I‘ll look if they gave me some calling card”

“hey, here‘s one”
“call them”
“how?”
“uhh, maybe use the phone? you pabo!”
“what phone?” I asked, I don’t have one, maybe she does?

I can see that she’s kind of irritated already, haha and I intend to keep it that way, she’s kind of cute for an Asian by the way

“see that receptionist over there? don‘t you think she has a phone?”

“miss, can we use the phone for an out going call?” she asked, then the receptionist glared at me
“umm, sure ma‘am”
“thanks”

“hello?”
“heeeeyy, who is this messed up?”
“it‘s m--”
“ooohhh! Dude, we were like freaking out when you left us. where are you?”
“I‘m here at -- where is this?” I asked this girl beside me
“Joo Chiat!” she immediately answered
“Joo Chiat” I answered to Arnold
“oohh, were here at Malaysia already Dude, sorry”
“what?! why did you guys left me?!”
“well you left us first! we thought you want to be alone, cause --”
“fine! just, tell me when will you be back”
“umm, about two days or so I guess?”
“what?! two days?!”
“or so” he added, so it means I will be alone for two days? -- or so??
“we‘ll just contact you as soon as we get back..”
“but how wi--”

*toot toot toot*

“eeeessssshhhhh!!”
her eyes widen -- this girl beside me and the receptionist

“what happened?” she asked
“they‘re in Malaysia”

she just nodded

“soooo.. mmm bye now” she suddenly said then she also turned her back! about to leave me, what the hell! that can’t be!

“hey!” I held her elbow
she looked at me, and like her eyes are asking me, ‘what the hell’?
I let go as fast as I held her..

“sorry” I murmured
“what now?” she asked
“I uhh, are you leaving me?” I asked
“mmm, maybe?”
“why? I thought --”

“look mister, I’m really sorry that helped you at the bridge earlier.. It‘s just my instinct to help others, but if you can’t at least thank me for saving your effin’ butt, then I‘m the one to be sorry! I mean, I helped you at the bridge -- not to mention it was a bad idea! I also paid for your ride to get here -- another mistake! I helped you with the guard too -- not to mention again that it was kind of stupid, helping the person who stalks you.. I mean, what was I thinking?! then I even helped you contact your mates, now what? what else do you want?! really! you‘re such an abusive person! I wonder why people like you exist! urrrghhh!”

I became speechless, I haven’t thanked her yet?
I .. I ..

“I‘m sorry”
“huh!” she somehow sound sarcastic
“you‘re sorry?” she really sound sarcastic now..
“well guess what, I‘m sorry too!” then she left me at the hotel lobby

the receptionist didn’t throw me out their hotel.. maybe she felt bad about me?

I feel bad about me too, really bad.. I’m not a bad person, really.. but..

I need to fix this.


Her POV

“eeeessssshhhhh!!”

nagulat ako sa reaction netong baliw na to.

“what happened?” tanong ko sa kanya
“they‘re in Malaysia”

tumango lang ako, wala naman akong sasabihin sa kanya eh

“soooo.. mmm bye now” sabi ko tapos patalikod na ako, syempre balak ko nang umakyat sa kwarto ko

“hey!” sabi nya tapos hinawakan nya ako sa siko
nagulat ako sa ginawa nya, naiinis na talaga ako ha! personal space please!

“sorry” narinig kong sabi nya
“what now?” tanong ko, nakakapikon na promise!
“I uhh, are you leaving me?”
“mmm, maybe?” I tried to sound polite padin naman pero, pikon na talaga ako, sobra na!
“why? I thought --” aba! hihirit ka pa?! kainis! eto kaya sayo?!

“look mister, I’m really sorry that helped you at the bridge earlier.. It‘s just my instinct to help others, but if you can’t at least thank me for saving your effin’ butt, then I‘m the one to be sorry! I mean, I helped you at the bridge -- not to mention it was a bad idea! I also paid for your ride to get here -- another mistake! I helped you with the guard too -- not to mention again that it was kind of stupid, helping the person who stalks you.. I mean, what was I thinking?! then I even helped you contact your mates, now what? what else do you want?! really! you‘re such an abusive person! I wonder why people like you exist! urrrghhh!”

natahimik sya, sobrang inis ko na kaya! wala na ba syang gagawin kundi ang humingi ng humingi ng pabor saken? tapos wala man lang kahit simpleng thank you? abah! swerte naman nya!

“I‘m sorry” narinig kong sabi nya

“huh!”
“you‘re sorry?” irritable kong tanong sa kanya
“well guess what, I‘m sorry too!” tapos nag walk out na ako, bahala ka dyan sa lobby! manigas ka! kainis grabe.. tumataas blood pressure ko sa kanya!

pagpasok ko ng kwarto ..

“UUUUUURRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! naiistress ako!! imbes na masaya ang bakasyon ko dito sa Singapore, kung makapang bad trip ang nilalang na yun! aba, stress talaga!”

humarap ako sa salamin, ang panget ko na!! T^T

pumunta ako sa banyo, sakto may bathtub dun, binuksan ko yung gripo tapos halos ubusin ko laman netong liquid soap para lang magkabula yung tubig sa tub.. kumuha muna ako ng twalya tapos nagtangal na ako ng damit ko, saka lumublob sa tub..

“haaaaayyyyy” napapikit ako.. ang saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrraaaaaaaaaaaaaap!

medyo matagal akong nakalublob sa tub, ang sarap talaga kasi dun, feeling ko natatangal lahat ng stress sa katawan ko, nung medyo inaantok na ako, saka ako nag shower..

pagkalabas ko ng banyo nagbihis agad ako, tapos humiga agad ako sa napakalambot na kama

I feel heaven na ulit! ^_^

nakapikit na ako, kanina nung nasa tub ako inaantok na ako, pero bakit ngayon ..

tumagilid ako, tapos pumikit uli kaso ganun padin.. dumapa ako, pero wala nangalay lang ako..
tumingin na uli ako sa kisame.. haaaayyyy! I will probably hate myself in the morning! I swear!


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sa chapter 4!! promise, babawi na talaga ako.. T______T
I feel like I've lost my writing skills T______T

sorry po.. bare with me muna.. sorry talaga

I'm currently writing chapter 5, so expect chapter 4 soon.. sorry po ulit ha? thank you sa comments.. :)


Friday, July 15, 2011

Chapter Two

“yes you” confusion shot her face
“can you pay for my ride?”

she pouted

“kapal ng mukha! and why in the world will I pay for your ride?”
“cause!”
“cause what?” she raised her eyebrow
“cause you saved me, if you didn‘t then I should be dead by now, and I won‘t be riding the bus”
“what kind of answer is that?!” she asked
“the one that will get you to pay my ride?”
“as if!”

“are you two going to argue all night? you can just go out of my bus” suddenly butt in by the driver

we looked at each other, she rolled her eyes then asked ..
“where are you going?”
“where are you going?” I asked her
“huh?!” then she looked at me with quiet suspicion, she even backed up a bit

Then she faced the bus driver
“I’m sorry.. here sir” she gave I don’t know how much

we immediately took our sits, good thing there’s only a guy in here or else people would glare at us cause we made them wait too much. well maybe cause of me cause.. you know.. I think you get my point

anyway she’s sitting in the couch across me
and she’s still looking at the pictures in her camera

“hey, You, what‘s your name?” I asked
she just looked at me for like a second? Then she gave another snobbish look!

“look, I‘ll pay you as soon as I can change my Australian dollar to Singapore dollar okay?”

She’s not talking!
Okay, I know I was a jerk! But hey, look here, I’m a handsome jerk
Pfft! I flatter myself too much

On the 6th bus stop she pressed the red button, then she got off
I immediately followed


Her POV

aba’t napaka kapal ng mukha ng lalakeng to! nakakainis!
kasalanan ko pang tulungan sya ha?
ewan ko ba kung ako sumusunod sa kanya o sya sumusunod saken! eeh! kainis!

naglalakad na ako ngayon papunta sa hotel ko
nakasunod padin sya

“don’t tell me you‘re going with me in the hotel?!”

nagulat sya sa bigla kong pagtanong sa kanya

“can‘t I?”
“how will you pay?”
“aren‘t you going to invite me to your room?”

ansaveeehh??!!

“no way!!”
“then hand me money to accommodate a room”
“aba‘y napaka kapal naman talaga ng mukha ng isang to oo! are you a syndicate?!”
“what?! does this handsome face looks like a syndicate to you?!”

“anong malay ko kung ginagamit mo lang yang itsura mo para makapanloko?!”
“what?!”
“ay, what if you‘re just using your looks to deceive people! to get money from them!? what if you were just acting to jump off the bridge earlier just for me to help you then you can get money from me?!”

kinabahan ako sa mga assumptions ko, kaya dahan dahan akong lumayo sa kanya, kinapa ko na din kung ano mang meron sa bag ko na pwedeng ibato sa kanya

ansama ng tingin nya saken! grabe yung simangot nya
nakapa ko yung hair brush ko, kaya naman dinampot ko tapos tapos

“aaaahhhhh!!” hinagis ko sa kanya tapos tumakbo ako palayo

“what the?! --”
“hey hey!! You!!”

“aaaaaahhhhhh!!” nakikita ko na yung hotel na tinutuluyan ko, agad akong pumasok sa loob
tinignan ako nung receptionist

“whooohhh”

*thug!*

“aaaaahhhhh!!” tapos lumayo ako sa pinto, sinong matinong tao ba naman kasi ang ihagis ang sarili sa salamin na pinto..
baliw ata to eh! sayang, gwapo pa naman.. nakapa weirdo nya talaga! stalker kaya sya??

“ma‘am? any problem?” tanong nung babae saken
“problem? problem? umm, no.. he-he”

“hey! You!” biglang pumasok yung lalake
napatingin kami nung receptionist sa kanya

“hala! anong ginagawa mo dito?!”
“ma‘am is there a problem? do I need to call security?”
“NO!” biglang sagot nitong lalakeng ang kapal ng mukha na to
“umm”
“no” tapos yung tingin ng lalakeng to saken parang parang..

“sir, are you a guest in this hotel?” biglang may dumating na lalake
“huh?!” tapos inalalayan sya palabas ng hotel
“no, wait.. You! hey, lady! you helped me! get me out of this one too, please!”

*ting ting ting!*
sawakas narinig ko din yung magic word sa kanya, parang naawa ako bigla

humabol ako sa kanila sa labas
“no! I‘m really with he --”
“sir, I‘ll take it from here, I‘m sorry also” sabi ko
“sigurado-- ay, are you sure ma‘am?”
“Pilipino po kayo?” tanong ko dun sa lalake na parang guard ata?
“ay, Pilipino ka din ma‘am? sigurado po ba kayo na hindi kayo ginagambala ng isang to?”
“ewan ko dito manong, basta ako na po muna bahala, salamat po ha? pasensya na din”
“sige ma‘am, tawagin nyo na lang po ako sa loob kung sakali”

tapos umalis na si manong, hinarap ko naman tong baliw na to

“You! seriously, are you a crazy person or something?” tanong ko sa kanya
“what? no!”
“then why are you following me?”
“cause, I don‘t know here”
“so you‘re here alone?” napataas pa kilay ko sa sagot nya
“no, actually I‘m in a group.. but since, umm, I got separated from them”
“where are they?” tanong ko, bigla akong nakaramdam ng awa sa mokong na to, instinct ba ng Pinoy ang ganito? asar huh!

“I don‘t know”
“how about contacting them? do you know their number?”
“yes, but I don‘t think I may be able to contact them”
“why not?”
“different country, different cell phone signal. duh” nag roll eyes pa sya, bad trip!

“wow pilosopo, what I mean is their contact number here”
“oh! umm, wait I‘ll look if they gave me some calling card”

“hey, here‘s one”
“call them”
“how?”
“uhh, maybe use the phone? you pabo!”
“what phone?” tanong nya

ay naku! masisipat ko noo ko sa isang to! ang sakit lang ng ulo ko sa kanya! grabe!

“see that receptionist over there? don‘t you think she has a phone?” urgh! sakit talaga sa ulo!

“miss, can we use the phone for an out going call?”
“umm, sure ma‘am”
“thanks”

“hello?”
“…”
“it‘s m--”
“…”
“I‘m here at -- where is this?”
“Joo Chiat!” sagot ko
“Joo Chiat”
“…”
“what?! why did you guys left me?!”


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salamat sa new readers
salamat sa lahat ng comment sa 1st chapter, nakakataba ng puso reactions nyo

kaso di ako makangiti ngayon.. malungkot ako! seryoso.. T_______T

kausapin nyo ako sa FB! feeling ko mababaliw na ako.. T________T

Tuesday, July 12, 2011

Chapter One

Her POV

“kamsahamnida, jalmugutseumnida. annyeong haseyo” tapos nag bow ako
[thank you, the food was delicious. bye]

kumain kasi ako ng dinner sa Korean restaurant dito sa Singapore.
tourist ako dito ngayon ^_^ sawakas nakapag leave din sa trabaho. I can finally enjoy myself!
oo ako lang, wala akong kasama dito, wala eh loner lang talaga ako.. haha

kinuha ko camera ko, tapos pinicturan ko yung view dito sa Marina’s bridge. sobrang ganda!

*lipat ng focus* then *click*
I smiled, narerelax ako sa ginagawa ko, ang sarap ng simoy ng hangin, ang linis linis tapos --

whoaaa!! O_O

“mister!!”
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!

hala Dyos ko po!!

ughk! oowwww, ang bigat nya!! >.<

“fcuk! why are you holding my hands lady?! let go!!”
“what?! why would I? are you trying to kill yourself?!”
“yes I am, stupid!”
“aba! hayop to ah! kung makatawag ka naman saken ng stupid! hoy! kapal mo! e kung bitawan nga kita dyan?! ha!”

“what are you saying? tsk, anyway let go of my hand! I wanna die!”
“shut up!” sigaw ko tapos pilit ko syang hinatak uli paakyat dito sa taas
“shit, let go!”
“wag ka ngang baliw dyan!”
“what?!”
“wag mo sayangin buhay mo!”
“look lady, I can‘t understand a word you are saying!! tsk, just let go! I‘m none of your business anyway!”
“urgh!!” tapos hinatak ko uli sya hanggang sa makaakyat na uli sya

“why are you bugging me?!!”
“why are you throwing your life off a bridge!?”
“then again I say!! Its none of your business!” tapos umakyat uli sya sa harang nung tulay
aba’y sira ulo pala to eh! gusto talaga magpakamatay! itulak ko kaya?

“hey! get down from there!!!” tapos hinatak ko yung kamay nya
na-off balance sya tapos …

“aray..”
“damn it!” narinig kong sabi nya
“my back!”
“pssh, it‘s your fault” tapos tumayo sya
tinignan ko sya ng masama tapos pilit akong tumayo..

“owww, ansakit!”
“I‘ll just go occupy other bridge, where no one will stop me” tapos tinignan nya ako mula ulo hangang paa

inirapan ko na lang sya, pero ano daw? lilipat sya ng ibang tulay? tinignan ko paligid namin, meron pa ngang ibang tulay.


His POV

I’m ending my life here. I don’t know what to do anymore. I think I’m over reacting but I’m already here at the bridge so yeah I’ll just do it.

*jump*

I’m waiting for a big splash of water or something, but I’m not feeling my body falling, so I opened my eyes, and to my surprise a girl is holding my left hand

“fcuk! why are you holding my hands lady?! let go!!”
“what?! why would I? are you trying to kill yourself?!”
“yes I am, stupid!”
“aba! hayop to ah! kung makatawag ka naman saken ng stupid! hoy! kapal mo! e kung bitawan nga kita jan?! ha!”

“what are you saying? tsk, anyway let go of my hand! I wanna die!”
“shut up!” she yelled, then she tried to pull me up
“shit, let go!”
“wag ka ngang baliw dyan!”
“what?!”
“wag mo sayangin buhay mo!”
“look lady, I can‘t understand a word you are saying!! tsk, just let go! I‘m none of your business anyway!”
“urgh!!” she pulled me again, and somehow my feet lift me up, stupid feet!

“why are you bugging me?!!”
“why are you throwing your life off a bridge!?”
“then again I say!! Its none of your business!” again I lift myself up on the bridge, about to attempt to jump again

“hey! get down from there!!!” she pulled me quite hard
I off-balanced then..

“aray..”
“damn it!”
“my back!” she said
“pssh, it‘s your fault” I answered, then I stood up
she’s looking at me, like she’s going to eat me, then she stood up

“owww, ansakit!” I can’t understand her! damnit
“I‘ll just go occupy other bridge, where no one will stop me” then I looked at her from head to toe

not bad, fair complexion, dark brown eyes, long hair, sexy.
but she gave me snobbish look, weird girl!

I put my hands in my pocket, then I started walking
I didn’t mean what I said, I just want to leave her here and be alone

As I walk, I always hear footsteps following me..
I looked back and there she is! What the hell?

“are you following me?!”
“yes!” -- Whoa?!

“why?!”
“to make sure that you won‘t jump off the bridge again”
“why do you care about me? you don‘t even know me!”
“umm, it‘s just my instinct to.. umm, lintek! hindi ko alam English ng kargo de consencia!”
“what? what are you saying? don‘t speak alien language!”
“it‘s Tagalog for your information”
“what ever” then I started to walk again

she’s still following and she’s starting to irritate me! So I faced her again

“okay, lady stop.. I won‘t jump off the bridge anymore okay? So stop following me!”
“okay!” she said, so I continue to walk

what the fudge?!

“I thought you said you‘d stop following me?”
“yeah I did!”
“then why are you still following me?”
“wow! illusyonada ka! I‘m going at the bus stop, as if!” then she walked pass me

psshh, women!

I hate this day!! I didn’t die because of this stranger, and now I don’t know where I’m going. tsk!

she’s sitting at the other end of the bench, I’m looking at her and she’s taking a photo of.. hmm, I looked at what she’s focusing at, but there’s nothing there!

“weirdo” I whispered

she smiled while looking at the picture she took, I looked away before she sees me looking at her

I saw a bus coming, I looked at her again. guess this isn’t her ride

we’re sitting here for like 10mins already! and it’s pass 11pm!
Where the hell are the busses?!
Another bus came, she stood. Bus number 33, going to Joo Chiat?
Anyway, she rode it. I run after her, but the driver stopped me at the door.

“tap your card please” he says
“umm, I don‘t have a card”
“then pay”

I searched my pocket but.. Damn, these are Australian dollar!

“I don‘t have Singapore dollar sir”
“then get off of my bus please”
“but .. ” I searched for the girl a while ago, and she’s looking at me

“hey, You!”
she looked at me with wide eyes open, she even pointed at her self


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pa A/C muna.. wwiiiiiiiiiii!!!!

wala pa akong nasusulat sa chapter 3.. well actually meron na, sa 1st page pa nga lang.. -_-

I'm not satisfied! (~~.)

comment please! magaan lang sa pakiramdam/damdamin ang FF na to I promise!

kung may reklamo po pala kayo about sa ending ng Ace of Hearts, yeah sorry dahil hindi ko na nalagyan ng prologue.. wala kasi talaga akong maisip na pang prologue dun.. I set my mind that it will be a cliffhanger story so wala po talaga akong napiga para sa request nyo.

anyway.. I badly need inspiration for this one.. and what I mean by inspiration is your comments.. please please please!!!

I'm begging!! gusto ko comment regarding the story ha? ayaw ko ng 'next po' kasi parang kulang ang dating nun saken.

magpapaka demanding na ako sa isang to, kasi naman po! pang apat ko na ito!! xD
ewan ko kung may mapipiga pa akong idea.. haha
and ewan ko din kung gusto nyo pa ba akong magsulat o sawa na kayo saken.. lol

please comment.. I love you all! mwah! :D

Sunday, July 3, 2011

Disclaimer, Cast & Teaser

Stranger by the Bridge


Disclaimer:
ang mga pangyayari ay pawang kathang-isip lamang, lahat po ito ay nag mula lamang sa imahinasyon ng may akda, kung may mangyari/nangyari man sa totoong buhay ay maaaring nagkataon lamang. Ang mga pangalan na gagamitin ay hiniram lamang upang bigyang katauhan ang mga karakter sa kwento o istorya.


Note: the story is inspired by the Thai Movie “Hello Stranger” and my trip out of the country..
*if the story seems familiar to those who have watched Hello Stranger, the plot is not the same with the movie, although it is quite similar because of some scenes that I will make are based from the movie. I will make sure that I won’t be plagiarizing the script of the said movie.

Estudyante po ako na nag-aaral pa lamang sa kolehiyo, pagpasensyahan nyo na po kung hindi ako agad makakapag update o kung natatagalan ang update ko, puro po kasi gabi ang uwi ko at Tuesday lang ang libre ko, Saturday naman parang awa nyo na po, ibigay nyo nang pahinga ko..

Salamat po sa lahat ng bumasa ng mga gawa ko, at sa mga babasa pa lang.. maraming salamat din po.. naway maabot ko ang inyong mga expectation..

Inuulit ko po, ako’y hamak na amateur lamang.. hindi po ako kasing galing ng ibang writer, pero nagpapasalamat po ako sa mga kumukunsidira saken na isang mahusay na manunulat..


Cast:


walang pangalan ang cast.
to know who's talking lalagyan ko lang ng 'His/Her POV'
seryoso, wala silang pangalan.

or kung matripan ko bibigyan ko sila.. pero as for now wala talaga.. haha xD


pero syempre ang bida sa FF ko wala padin pinagkaiba.. #UNKABOGABLEJAEVON lang!
hindi na mababago yun, masyado ko silang love eh.. hehe


*pasensya na po, sabog lang ako ngayon..


Teaser:

Falling in love in a short span of time is considered a playful feeling -- as they say.. 
But what if the feeling that you thought was nothing is real?
What will you do?


Two strangers, both came from foreign countries; they met in a foreign land; their language are different from each other.. will it be a barrier? or will the language of love spoke for them?


Let us all sink into the story of this two. The one with a broken heart, and the one with -- hmm let’s just all see.


*I need feed backs sa Teaser.. is it enough? o ano po.. please comment
I badly need it! pleeeeaaaaassssseee!!



AND LASTLY

hindi pa po ito lalabas ngayon.. ginigisa ko pa lang ito. hindi pa luto kaya hindi pa pwede ihain.. gets? hehe, salamat po ^________^



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*this is my Fourth story, sana hindi pa kayo nagsasawa saken.. haha
salamat po ulit! :)