Tuesday, July 19, 2011

Chapter Three

His POV

“You! Seriously, are you a crazy person or something?” she asked
“what? No!” I’m not a crazy guy, you crazy girl!
“then why are you following me?”
“cause, I don‘t know here” I confessed
“so you‘re here alone?” even her eyebrow raised. pft!
“no, actually I‘m in a group.. but since, umm, I got separated from them” I can’t tell her the reason..
“where are they?” she suddenly asked, does she want to get rid of me?

“I don‘t know”
“how about contacting them? do you know their number?”
“yes, but I don‘t think I may be able to contact them”
“why not?”
“different country, different cell phone signal. duh” is she .. nah, never mind

“wow pilosopo, what I mean is their contact number here” seriously, I hate it when she speaks Tagalog is it? yeah, what if she’s saying mean words to me? I wouldn’t know right?

“oh! umm, wait I‘ll look if they gave me some calling card”

“hey, here‘s one”
“call them”
“how?”
“uhh, maybe use the phone? you pabo!”
“what phone?” I asked, I don’t have one, maybe she does?

I can see that she’s kind of irritated already, haha and I intend to keep it that way, she’s kind of cute for an Asian by the way

“see that receptionist over there? don‘t you think she has a phone?”

“miss, can we use the phone for an out going call?” she asked, then the receptionist glared at me
“umm, sure ma‘am”
“thanks”

“hello?”
“heeeeyy, who is this messed up?”
“it‘s m--”
“ooohhh! Dude, we were like freaking out when you left us. where are you?”
“I‘m here at -- where is this?” I asked this girl beside me
“Joo Chiat!” she immediately answered
“Joo Chiat” I answered to Arnold
“oohh, were here at Malaysia already Dude, sorry”
“what?! why did you guys left me?!”
“well you left us first! we thought you want to be alone, cause --”
“fine! just, tell me when will you be back”
“umm, about two days or so I guess?”
“what?! two days?!”
“or so” he added, so it means I will be alone for two days? -- or so??
“we‘ll just contact you as soon as we get back..”
“but how wi--”

*toot toot toot*

“eeeessssshhhhh!!”
her eyes widen -- this girl beside me and the receptionist

“what happened?” she asked
“they‘re in Malaysia”

she just nodded

“soooo.. mmm bye now” she suddenly said then she also turned her back! about to leave me, what the hell! that can’t be!

“hey!” I held her elbow
she looked at me, and like her eyes are asking me, ‘what the hell’?
I let go as fast as I held her..

“sorry” I murmured
“what now?” she asked
“I uhh, are you leaving me?” I asked
“mmm, maybe?”
“why? I thought --”

“look mister, I’m really sorry that helped you at the bridge earlier.. It‘s just my instinct to help others, but if you can’t at least thank me for saving your effin’ butt, then I‘m the one to be sorry! I mean, I helped you at the bridge -- not to mention it was a bad idea! I also paid for your ride to get here -- another mistake! I helped you with the guard too -- not to mention again that it was kind of stupid, helping the person who stalks you.. I mean, what was I thinking?! then I even helped you contact your mates, now what? what else do you want?! really! you‘re such an abusive person! I wonder why people like you exist! urrrghhh!”

I became speechless, I haven’t thanked her yet?
I .. I ..

“I‘m sorry”
“huh!” she somehow sound sarcastic
“you‘re sorry?” she really sound sarcastic now..
“well guess what, I‘m sorry too!” then she left me at the hotel lobby

the receptionist didn’t throw me out their hotel.. maybe she felt bad about me?

I feel bad about me too, really bad.. I’m not a bad person, really.. but..

I need to fix this.


Her POV

“eeeessssshhhhh!!”

nagulat ako sa reaction netong baliw na to.

“what happened?” tanong ko sa kanya
“they‘re in Malaysia”

tumango lang ako, wala naman akong sasabihin sa kanya eh

“soooo.. mmm bye now” sabi ko tapos patalikod na ako, syempre balak ko nang umakyat sa kwarto ko

“hey!” sabi nya tapos hinawakan nya ako sa siko
nagulat ako sa ginawa nya, naiinis na talaga ako ha! personal space please!

“sorry” narinig kong sabi nya
“what now?” tanong ko, nakakapikon na promise!
“I uhh, are you leaving me?”
“mmm, maybe?” I tried to sound polite padin naman pero, pikon na talaga ako, sobra na!
“why? I thought --” aba! hihirit ka pa?! kainis! eto kaya sayo?!

“look mister, I’m really sorry that helped you at the bridge earlier.. It‘s just my instinct to help others, but if you can’t at least thank me for saving your effin’ butt, then I‘m the one to be sorry! I mean, I helped you at the bridge -- not to mention it was a bad idea! I also paid for your ride to get here -- another mistake! I helped you with the guard too -- not to mention again that it was kind of stupid, helping the person who stalks you.. I mean, what was I thinking?! then I even helped you contact your mates, now what? what else do you want?! really! you‘re such an abusive person! I wonder why people like you exist! urrrghhh!”

natahimik sya, sobrang inis ko na kaya! wala na ba syang gagawin kundi ang humingi ng humingi ng pabor saken? tapos wala man lang kahit simpleng thank you? abah! swerte naman nya!

“I‘m sorry” narinig kong sabi nya

“huh!”
“you‘re sorry?” irritable kong tanong sa kanya
“well guess what, I‘m sorry too!” tapos nag walk out na ako, bahala ka dyan sa lobby! manigas ka! kainis grabe.. tumataas blood pressure ko sa kanya!

pagpasok ko ng kwarto ..

“UUUUUURRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! naiistress ako!! imbes na masaya ang bakasyon ko dito sa Singapore, kung makapang bad trip ang nilalang na yun! aba, stress talaga!”

humarap ako sa salamin, ang panget ko na!! T^T

pumunta ako sa banyo, sakto may bathtub dun, binuksan ko yung gripo tapos halos ubusin ko laman netong liquid soap para lang magkabula yung tubig sa tub.. kumuha muna ako ng twalya tapos nagtangal na ako ng damit ko, saka lumublob sa tub..

“haaaaayyyyy” napapikit ako.. ang saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrraaaaaaaaaaaaaap!

medyo matagal akong nakalublob sa tub, ang sarap talaga kasi dun, feeling ko natatangal lahat ng stress sa katawan ko, nung medyo inaantok na ako, saka ako nag shower..

pagkalabas ko ng banyo nagbihis agad ako, tapos humiga agad ako sa napakalambot na kama

I feel heaven na ulit! ^_^

nakapikit na ako, kanina nung nasa tub ako inaantok na ako, pero bakit ngayon ..

tumagilid ako, tapos pumikit uli kaso ganun padin.. dumapa ako, pero wala nangalay lang ako..
tumingin na uli ako sa kisame.. haaaayyyy! I will probably hate myself in the morning! I swear!


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sa chapter 4!! promise, babawi na talaga ako.. T______T
I feel like I've lost my writing skills T______T

sorry po.. bare with me muna.. sorry talaga

I'm currently writing chapter 5, so expect chapter 4 soon.. sorry po ulit ha? thank you sa comments.. :)


8 comments:

  1. nah! bat ka nagsosorry.. swish.!!! ganda pa naman ahh.. ahahha.. expect ko talaga papasok si dd sa room at naliligo pa si mm..wahahaha.. lol pa siguro ako buti di nangyari..


    mm: nagiguilty lang yan, kasi sa gnawa kay foreigner..awahhaha
    makonsensia kapa! go

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  2. sis! si claire toh! :P

    hala! mas gumanda nga mga ff mo sis tas nag sosorry ka. weeeehhh..ganda ng chapter na toh sis! kakatuwa talaga si mm, haha, si dd naman nakakaawa di makaka intindi ng tagalog..hahaha


    hintay ako sa susunod na chaps sis! :D

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  3. ayyy! pa-koment nga! pwede ba? pwede ba?? wala na magagawa ito na ehh..

    nakakatuwa ung element ng story na di makaintindi si dd ng tagalog.. may plus the femininity ni mm!

    and ang sarap batukan ni dd ah.. lol! :P

    nakakatuwa na ang pangyayari..

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  4. Gusto ko yung story sis :D
    Hindi naiintindihan ni DD yung sinasabi ni MM.
    Naiimagine ko lang kung ani reaksyon nya pag nagsasalita si MM ng tagaloh rotf.

    Iniisip siguro ni MM si DD kaya di sya makatulog!

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  5. waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

    mukhang mabibitin na naman ako nito ah.

    lalo pa at papunta ka nang hongkong :D

    anyway i'm sure makakakuha ka na naman nang inspirations dun hehehe.

    nakonsensiya na si MM kase hindi niya tinulungan si DD lol


    -mommy

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  6. ayan wah magcocomment na ko :D

    ang kulit lang nung dalawa hahaha

    hindi din matitiis ni mm yan

    hahaha

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  7. wahahahaha. uy dd! bumili ka ng tagalog-english diktio para ma intindihan mo ang mm. hahahaha

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  8. ano bang meron tong jaime na to????
    gusto mo ba magpa-tutor sakin ng tagalog??? hahah



    at ang MM, hindi makatulog.. bakit kaya??? baka nakokonsensya kasi hindi tinulungan si jaime?? o dahil naaalala ang mukha ng "handsome jerk'?? hahahaha





    ang hirap pala pag late magbasa.. halos lahat ng sasabihin ko, naicomment na nila... tssss....

    xxD



    -thisisenLiexx

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