Thursday, September 8, 2011

Chapter Thirteen

His POV

I have a surprise for Lailah later tonight, I just have to kill the time, and it’s all good to go
I hope she likes it, it’s a bit hard to do especially in a short span of time, but I managed
after all, money talked with this one

“why are you smiling? you‘re creeping me out” she said
“I‘m not smiling” I said, but I’m smirking
“really? then what do you call that curve on you lips?”
“a smirk?!” I said then I took a glance from her, she laughed. a music to my ears

after that, we became quiet again

“I‘m tired!” she said while stretching and yawning
“let‘s go back to Singapore” I said
“what?!” she said in a questioning tone
“I said, let‘s go back to Singapore”
“why?”
“I will be departing after two days, I just want to relax there, besides I‘m more familiarized there than here”

“okay, we‘ll go now?”
“yup, we‘ll just take a quick stop at Mitchie‘s house to bid goodbye”


“bye Mitchie! thanks for everything!!” she said while waving her hands out the window as we drove away from Mitchie’s family

“I can‘t believe I only got two days left to stay abroad, then I‘ll be all stressed out again” she said with closed eyes

“why don‘t you come with me in Australia?” I asked
she abruptly opened her eyes then looked at me

“are you serious?” she said leaning to see my reaction
“yes, and don‘t disturb me, I‘m driving”
“sorry -- but --”
“it‘s okay if you don‘t want to, I‘m only suggesting anyway”
“ooohh!” she said nodding

“maybe next time” she said in a low voice that kinda disappoint me for some reason

“hey, I‘ll take a nap, I‘m kinda sleepy so --” yawn
“okay”

she leaned on the windowpane

why do I have this strange feeling?
why does it feel like --
nah! I don’t know myself anymore!

for goodness sake, I’m Damon! one of those chick magnet back at Australia, a dumper, I’m not a sweet kind of guy, but why am I doing all this, not even with Jestine that I did this? urgh! frustrating!

we’re almost back at Singapore, just a few more minutes and we’re there
I can’t help myself but feel nervous, well .. I don’t know actually what am I nervous about but.. yeah

“Lailah?” I slightly tapped her shoulder to wake her up, she’s been sleeping the whole trip! -_-
“hmm? -- ooww! my neck!” she said while opening her eyes

go figure, who wouldn’t have a stiff neck for sleeping on the same position for how many hours?

anyway ..

“where are we?” she asked
“Marina‘s bridge”
she looked around



“what are we doing here? what time is it?”
“pass 9 o‘clock”
“really? how long did I slept?”
“the whole trip”
“aw, sorry”
“no, it‘s okay”

“why are we here exactly?”
“here” I handed her a floating lantern, the one that you lit at the bottom? then you’ll set it out to the sky? that one

she just looked at me, with that questioning look on her face

“what am I suppose to do with this?” she asked
“well” I paused, then I looked around

“you‘ll lit it, and let it fly to the sky”
“then?”
“you wish to it”
she smiled, I guess she now knows what I’m trying to do

“here” I handed her a lighter
I held the upper part so she can lit the bottom

“it‘s ready” she said smiling
“are you ready?” I asked
“yes” she answered
“make a wish then”

she closed her eyes
after a minute she opened it

we both let go of the lantern
we’re looking at it as it goes up



“now close your eyes again”
“why?”
“just do it” I said, she followed

after a few minutes ..

“now open it, and look up”
“are you playing games with --”



“.. you did this?” she asked with teary eyes
I just nodded

“why did you do this?” she asked still smiling and I guess what I just saw is a tear of joy

“well, you said that you want to see a meteor shower, but I can’t do that so I thought of another way”

“thank you” she said, then she hugged me

I’ve got this damn feeling, I can’t understand!!

then.. it all follows



I kissed her.. I.. felt that it was the right thing to do.
she looked at me, and .. I don’t know, I can’t read her, was I the only one who felt that it was right?

we went back to the car and I started driving

awkward silence ..

“thank you again by the way” she said
“it was nothing” I answered back

another silence between us and it’s killing me inside!!

“Pedro --”
I stopped the car, I want to straight things out

“lets talk” I said
“okay .. we agreed that we will always talk things out, so ..” she paused
“do you like me?” she asked after

I became quiet, I don’t know what to answer .. but

“I don‘t know what is this feeling, just to be honest”
“thank you for answering honestly, but ..”
“but what?”
“I think I need to go back to Malaysia”
“what?! why?!”
“I didn‘t get to spend much time with Mitchie” she said with a cold voice
“why are you doing this to me Lailah?!” that stupid sh*t of sentence fumed me up
“I don‘t know!! I don‘t understand either!” she said then she attempted to open her side of the door
“don‘t you dare get out of this car” I warned her
“what do you want me to do?!” she yelled

I can’t take it!! damn! why is she doing this?! and why am I feeling this?!

“I‘m the one who‘s getting out of this car” I said then went out of the car

“Pedro!!” I heard her yell to me, but I didn’t look back instead I continued walking
“Pedro!!!!!” I heard her again, and now I think she’s crying

I walked still, away from her but then I stopped, what the hell am I doing here?
I turned to look back, I saw a light from a car.. but it passed me, I guess it’s not her
stupid me!! I run .. I run back to her .. I’m seeing the car, but there’s no one there anymore!

“Lailah!!” I yelled as I look from left to right, sh*t! I’m so stupid!!

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A/C (PAKIBASA PO.. IMPORTANTE ITO)

o ayan! kinilig kayo sa umpisa pero bigla ko kayong pinalagapak pagdating ng huli e noh? haha alam ko, hayuff ako.. xD

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, gagawin ko na yung last chapter (chapter 14) yun na yung ending.. bilis ba? kailangan po eh.. haha, masyado na akong nagiging busy kaya hindi ko na magagawang harapin itong FF ko as much as possible.. kaya ayun, tatapusin ko na lang.. ayoko naman kasi iwan din to na nakahang lang.. (kahit cliffhanger ang ending, haha)

mmm, balak ko sa ending hatiin sa 2parts.. wag po masyadong iexpect na mahaba ang ending na tulad ng Ace of Hearts, no no no no.. hindi sya ganun.. haha parang isang chapter lang sya na mas mahaba ng konti?? basta ganun! hahatiin ko po.. haha kasi nasa isang part ang.. dendenen.. twist.. xD super bitin ang ending alam ko.. at siguradong papatayin nyo ako sa mga katakot takot nyong comments.. haha pero wala po, ganun talaga.. mahalin nyo na lang ako sa mga comments nyo.. lol

salamat sa paghihintay at pagsupport sa FF ko na to.. :)
ito ang pinaka maikli sa apat na gawa ko.. haha, pero full length na tong matatawag.. xD

ayun.. tama na, bored na magbasa yung iba.. haha

maraming salamat pala sa mga silent reader na nabasag ang pagiging silent.. haha, dahil sa inyo napatunayn ko sa sarili ko na kahit papano e magaling pala talaga ako.. haha xD

salamat din sa mga all out supporters kasi kayo yung mga nageencourage saken para gawin at ipagpatuloy ito.. :)

15 comments:

  1. OMG CAMSur!!!! for the record!!! sa apat na FF mo, ito ang 1st time na ako ang unang magcocomment sa isang chapter... shhhhhhhheeeeeeeesssshhhhh!!! teary-eyed ako,hahaha....



    well eto na!! kinilig talaga ako...
    hang taray lang!!! A for effort sa mga floating lanterns... nakanah!!! napaWOW *o* talaga ako nung nakita ko yung pic... ang ganda, grabe....

    PERO TEKA NAMAN!!!!

    mas kinilig ako dun sa pic sa baba..hahaha... may naalala akong "last good nyt power hug" na parang may konting kiss way back then,bwahahahaha....
    TAPOS.... TAPOS......
    ano na naman yung nangyari?? bakit may baba kotse scene na naganap?? nawindang naman aKO... halah!! ano ng susunod?? Ilabas na,hahahaha....

    mabibitin ba kaming nakangiti o lumuluha??? pwede ba yun??hahaha...aBAngerz na talaga...

    labyow!!! xD

    -thisisenLiexx :)))

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  2. kakakilig! waaaaaa. pero nakakasad naman. last chapter na ang susunod! pero we understand insan! makaka make ka pa nman ng ibang FF d ba? heheh. can't wait for the ending! for sure EPIC ang finale nito! weeeeeeeee!

    -Timmy

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  3. SIS CAMAE!! (ok umaala Damon lang sa pagsigaw LOL) Ano ba sis bitin super saan na napunta si Lailah?! Ayun na e kilig na kilig na ako e tapos biglang nag-away(Whutt?!) LOL :))=)) Nagkahiwalay na ba sila? :'( For life:'( huhuhu sis sabihin mo na kung tragic ang ending na ito at hindi comedy ng maihanda ko ang tissue at tubig ko sa ending ng ff mo :)) Huhuhu I have a feeling na they aren't going to be together sa ending ano ba sis pinapaiyak mo ako e :'( (drama mode lang sensya na) OH WELL DAMON AND JAMIE/ PEDRO AND LAILAH F-FOREVER PA DIN AKO :)) at OMG sa kissing scene biglaan LOL. Next na sis naeexcite ako sa ending mo na kinakabahan e. Haba na ng comment ko ano ba ito?! :))=))

    -Karol

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  4. dear CAMAE,

    calling calling the "ever talented and great writer of this fanfic" :)) andito na ulit ako sa batangas..... so nalalabi na ang araw sakin nitong si lappy... kaya sana maipost na nya ang last chapter... ito ay isang PRESSURE kasi kinilig talaga ako, promise tas biglang nabitin... kating kati na kong basahin ang ending... maawa't mahabag ka na..huhuhuhu...



    xoxo,
    ate maeLie :))


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    sana counted to,hahaha xD

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  5. waaaaaaaaah!!!! nakakakilig na ung umpisa pero sa bandang huli nakakalungkot... :( affected lang..ano bey?! mag-eend na? tapos di pa nila alam ang tunay na pangalan ng isa't-isa.. well it proves that name doesn't matter in love whether it's the real name or not..as long as your heart desires to love that person.. LOVE na topic ko.. kasi di nila mapangalanan ang nararamdaman nila for each other. tama ba? in love ba sila sa isa't-isa? baka naman hindi..assuming lang ako..hehhehe.. hayaan nyo na ko since yung ang nafefeel ko between them. mamimiss ko si lailah/pedro since mag-eend na siya.. excited na ako sa ending... ^_^

    keep it up and sana gumawa ka pa ng maraming marami jaevon ff..

    YOU'RE ONE OF MY IDOLS pagdating sa pagsusulat ng lovestory.

    avid reader,
    em-em codz

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  6. done reading c-13..omg damon..d best ang light shower..tpos biglang away mode ung 2..haha..phone mode, can't comment in d blog. feeling ko di cl s ending..wg nmn sna..please..hahaha..

    -Casey

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  7. sis kiligvibes nung una iyak nung last part addick na ako nito grabeh .....bakit ganun ..last chap na sis..??wish kulang na di nasha matapos promise ayokong matapos sha ......wag nalang sis ....lol .....sis your the best among the rest ....
    love you so much talaga ....queen of fanfic ..

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  8. the best ang story na to sana next chapter na...naku mamimiss kong magbasa ng ff na ito kapag natapos na...lagi kong hinihintay ang mga updates mo...the best ka!!!

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  9. ayy malapit na matapos???so sad naman...i'm a silent reader pero nagcomment talaga ako ngayon kasi super ganda talaga ng gawa mo...hindi ko mapigilang hindi magcomment para lalo kang mainspire...nakakainspire pa naman basahin ang ff na ito...can't wait for the next chapter...naiiyak na ako habang binabasa itong chapter na to...you're a great writer!!! super havey ang ginawa ni pedro sooooo sweeeeet...sana di pa ito matapos...


    -Keziah

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  10. ok lang po na nakakabitin pero sana po wag nyo naman kaming bitinin kung magkikita pa po ba sila or hindi na :(( hehe but you are the Best!

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  11. Ikaw na, cge ikaw na ang magaling gumawa FF.

    Ikaw na IDOL ko!:)

    Sana maganda ang ending nito.....

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  12. CARINA MAE NANA,

    Galit ako sayo, sobrang galit dahil tatapusin mo na itong FF nato. Wala naman akong magawa bilang reader but I'm happy na di mo kami binigo dahil tinapos mo ito and you gave your best shot para makapag-update.

    I super love your stories and this one may be the lightest attack sa story yet you made me feel as if I'm the one portraying the role.

    OA lang no?

    HOI! Di ka talaga magpapaawat. Pati ba naman sa end ng chapter 13 eh nangbibitin ka pa. Hindi ka na naawa sa aming lahat.

    Kung kailan na talaga ako napaiyak, dun mo pa pinutol. Alam mo namang ang dali kong maiyak.I love the last part. Yong feeling ba na di mo maintindihan pero alam mong may something ka nang nafefeel to that person pero ayaw mo lang aminin..

    I AM A VICTIM OF THAT FEELING AS OF THIS MOMENT!
    awhhhh.ahah nakarelate lang..sorry..

    I really love the emotions na pinapakita nila, yong part na parang they don't understand themselves why they are doing those things. And I love Damon's efforts(aside from his name)sweet nyah talaga. And I love it when nagsusuplado siya at galit.

    Si Jamie naman..Okey lang!
    haha.. JOKE

    Her identity is really common to all. I somewhat sees myself in her.Yong taong willing to do anything to make the other person feel better. Kahit minsan weird na yong ginagawa.

    I also love yong casino part.Well, she really proved she isn't a jinx but a charm.

    GUSTO KO PA SANA NG MAS CUTE SCENES...

    GUSTO KO PA SANA NG MAS MAHABANG STORY...

    GUSTO KO PA SANA NG SLIGHT COMPLICATIONS...

    GUSTO KO PA SANA NG MGA KAKAIBA AT SWEET NA EKSENA...

    LAHAT NG ITO AY MANANATILING SANA MAGDEDEPENDE SA DECISION NI CAMAE.

    Nalulungkot man ako, and I'll miss this FF but I'm looking forward sa maraming FF pa.hahah

    Sana lang, wag mo kaming bitinin dahil kilala kita camae. At I know na maganda ang kalalabasan nito.

    At ito ay unexpected, diba?

    Mahaba na ba ang speech ko? malaki kasi ang pagkakautang ko sayo.

    Sa lahat pala ng nagcomment at sumuporta kay CAMAE..thank you. dahil nung time na feel nyang walang magbabasa nagsilabasan kayo.

    hindi sana kayo lumabas para umiyak to..ahahah..

    Kidding aside, I was once a silent reader. Eh, ano ako ngayon? silent parin, pero isahan ang comment.

    GOd bless CAMAE at good luck in everything you do.hahaha


    NAGDADRAMA,
    ateh fay -_-

    *P.S.
    ok na ba ang comment na to? mahaba na or kailangan pa ng book 2?
    hahah,,salamat talaga CAMAe for your FFs and always remember na I'm your no. 1 fan, madami man ang nagkiclaim..God bless..
    haha XD adik

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  13. hi camae! tnx for posting my comment... SeyMacki here..... i'll wait for the final chaps.....

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  14. i super hate you for using my dream date as a scene in your story. but i love you coz you made me more in love with my dream date! hahaha

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  15. simple lang ang sagot sa katanungan mo pedro. inlababo ka kay lailah. inlababo kayo each other.

    at ang sweeeet sweeet ni damon. wooow. di ko inaasahan na gagawin nia un. nakaka iyak

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