Her POV
“kamsahamnida, jalmugutseumnida. annyeong haseyo” tapos nag bow ako
[thank you, the food was delicious. bye]
kumain kasi ako ng dinner sa Korean restaurant dito sa Singapore.
tourist ako dito ngayon ^_^ sawakas nakapag leave din sa trabaho. I can finally enjoy myself!
oo ako lang, wala akong kasama dito, wala eh loner lang talaga ako.. haha
kinuha ko camera ko, tapos pinicturan ko yung view dito sa Marina’s bridge. sobrang ganda!
*lipat ng focus* then *click*
I smiled, narerelax ako sa ginagawa ko, ang sarap ng simoy ng hangin, ang linis linis tapos --
whoaaa!! O_O
“mister!!”
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!
hala Dyos ko po!!
ughk! oowwww, ang bigat nya!! >.<
“fcuk! why are you holding my hands lady?! let go!!”
“what?! why would I? are you trying to kill yourself?!”
“yes I am, stupid!”
“aba! hayop to ah! kung makatawag ka naman saken ng stupid! hoy! kapal mo! e kung bitawan nga kita dyan?! ha!”
“what are you saying? tsk, anyway let go of my hand! I wanna die!”
“shut up!” sigaw ko tapos pilit ko syang hinatak uli paakyat dito sa taas
“shit, let go!”
“wag ka ngang baliw dyan!”
“what?!”
“wag mo sayangin buhay mo!”
“look lady, I can‘t understand a word you are saying!! tsk, just let go! I‘m none of your business anyway!”
“urgh!!” tapos hinatak ko uli sya hanggang sa makaakyat na uli sya
“why are you bugging me?!!”
“why are you throwing your life off a bridge!?”
“then again I say!! Its none of your business!” tapos umakyat uli sya sa harang nung tulay
aba’y sira ulo pala to eh! gusto talaga magpakamatay! itulak ko kaya?
“hey! get down from there!!!” tapos hinatak ko yung kamay nya
na-off balance sya tapos …
“aray..”
“damn it!” narinig kong sabi nya
“my back!”
“pssh, it‘s your fault” tapos tumayo sya
tinignan ko sya ng masama tapos pilit akong tumayo..
“owww, ansakit!”
“I‘ll just go occupy other bridge, where no one will stop me” tapos tinignan nya ako mula ulo hangang paa
inirapan ko na lang sya, pero ano daw? lilipat sya ng ibang tulay? tinignan ko paligid namin, meron pa ngang ibang tulay.
His POV
I’m ending my life here. I don’t know what to do anymore. I think I’m over reacting but I’m already here at the bridge so yeah I’ll just do it.
*jump*
I’m waiting for a big splash of water or something, but I’m not feeling my body falling, so I opened my eyes, and to my surprise a girl is holding my left hand
“fcuk! why are you holding my hands lady?! let go!!”
“what?! why would I? are you trying to kill yourself?!”
“yes I am, stupid!”
“aba! hayop to ah! kung makatawag ka naman saken ng stupid! hoy! kapal mo! e kung bitawan nga kita jan?! ha!”
“what are you saying? tsk, anyway let go of my hand! I wanna die!”
“shut up!” she yelled, then she tried to pull me up
“shit, let go!”
“wag ka ngang baliw dyan!”
“what?!”
“wag mo sayangin buhay mo!”
“look lady, I can‘t understand a word you are saying!! tsk, just let go! I‘m none of your business anyway!”
“urgh!!” she pulled me again, and somehow my feet lift me up, stupid feet!
“why are you bugging me?!!”
“why are you throwing your life off a bridge!?”
“then again I say!! Its none of your business!” again I lift myself up on the bridge, about to attempt to jump again
“hey! get down from there!!!” she pulled me quite hard
I off-balanced then..
“aray..”
“damn it!”
“my back!” she said
“pssh, it‘s your fault” I answered, then I stood up
she’s looking at me, like she’s going to eat me, then she stood up
“owww, ansakit!” I can’t understand her! damnit
“I‘ll just go occupy other bridge, where no one will stop me” then I looked at her from head to toe
not bad, fair complexion, dark brown eyes, long hair, sexy.
but she gave me snobbish look, weird girl!
I put my hands in my pocket, then I started walking
I didn’t mean what I said, I just want to leave her here and be alone
As I walk, I always hear footsteps following me..
I looked back and there she is! What the hell?
“are you following me?!”
“yes!” -- Whoa?!
“why?!”
“to make sure that you won‘t jump off the bridge again”
“why do you care about me? you don‘t even know me!”
“umm, it‘s just my instinct to.. umm, lintek! hindi ko alam English ng kargo de consencia!”
“what? what are you saying? don‘t speak alien language!”
“it‘s Tagalog for your information”
“what ever” then I started to walk again
she’s still following and she’s starting to irritate me! So I faced her again
“okay, lady stop.. I won‘t jump off the bridge anymore okay? So stop following me!”
“okay!” she said, so I continue to walk
what the fudge?!
“I thought you said you‘d stop following me?”
“yeah I did!”
“then why are you still following me?”
“wow! illusyonada ka! I‘m going at the bus stop, as if!” then she walked pass me
psshh, women!
I hate this day!! I didn’t die because of this stranger, and now I don’t know where I’m going. tsk!
she’s sitting at the other end of the bench, I’m looking at her and she’s taking a photo of.. hmm, I looked at what she’s focusing at, but there’s nothing there!
“weirdo” I whispered
she smiled while looking at the picture she took, I looked away before she sees me looking at her
I saw a bus coming, I looked at her again. guess this isn’t her ride
we’re sitting here for like 10mins already! and it’s pass 11pm!
Where the hell are the busses?!
Another bus came, she stood. Bus number 33, going to Joo Chiat?
Anyway, she rode it. I run after her, but the driver stopped me at the door.
“tap your card please” he says
“umm, I don‘t have a card”
“then pay”
I searched my pocket but.. Damn, these are Australian dollar!
“I don‘t have Singapore dollar sir”
“then get off of my bus please”
“but .. ” I searched for the girl a while ago, and she’s looking at me
“hey, You!”
she looked at me with wide eyes open, she even pointed at her self
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pa A/C muna.. wwiiiiiiiiiii!!!!
wala pa akong nasusulat sa chapter 3.. well actually meron na, sa 1st page pa nga lang.. -_-
I'm not satisfied! (~~.)
comment please! magaan lang sa pakiramdam/damdamin ang FF na to I promise!
kung may reklamo po pala kayo about sa ending ng Ace of Hearts, yeah sorry dahil hindi ko na nalagyan ng prologue.. wala kasi talaga akong maisip na pang prologue dun.. I set my mind that it will be a cliffhanger story so wala po talaga akong napiga para sa request nyo.
anyway.. I badly need inspiration for this one.. and what I mean by inspiration is your comments.. please please please!!!
I'm begging!! gusto ko comment regarding the story ha? ayaw ko ng 'next po' kasi parang kulang ang dating nun saken.
magpapaka demanding na ako sa isang to, kasi naman po! pang apat ko na ito!! xD
ewan ko kung may mapipiga pa akong idea.. haha
and ewan ko din kung gusto nyo pa ba akong magsulat o sawa na kayo saken.. lol
please comment.. I love you all! mwah! :D
nice,,,,and riot kc parang opposite pole attract goodluck..till next chapter
ReplyDeleteso interesting!so exciting! though the characters are nameless-you still define them. haaay ang galing mo sis! itsfo real-unkabogable JeaVon. you know how they act, think and feel. it's just simply amazing! cant wait for the next chapter! thumbs up! :)
ReplyDeleteCamae!.....next nah!...hahahaha kidding!....panalo teh!1st encounter ng dalawa away agad!hahahahaha im sooooooooooo loving dis anader FF of urs!.....
ReplyDeletetapos!natawa aq sa alien language ka loka!.....labas ng chap.2 nagawa mo na pala ang chap.3...pinapatagal ma pa talaga....waaaaaaaaaaaaaaa at di mawawala ito ang "BITIiiiiiiiiiiN"...... :))
Excited for the next chapter! :D
ReplyDeleteNabitiin aketch :)
cams!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletemay bago ka na namang ff ikaw na ikaw nang magaling magsulat hahah
kidding aside ang galing mo talaga
interesting tong bago mong gawa
nakakatawa pareho yung characters
at hindi ka pa din nagbabago ang galing mong
mambitin hahaha
- JECK
HI! i'm such a fan of your stories! napiyak mo ko ng bongga. Alam mo yung naiisip ko ung fanfic mo with no reason at all? ganun ung impact! ahahah..
ReplyDeletewith this story, sana ung parang iba naman. haha! di ko alam kung panung iba eh, basta parang gusto ko ung may pagkaplayfull kiss hahah. if that can be! haha! thanks! keep it coming
you are such a good writer! :D
interesting sis huh.. :D ganda ng chapter 1 mo..
ReplyDelete<3 caryl
CAMAe! ayun.. love na love ko na ang new ff nato! di naman siya kasi gaanong mabigat sa pakiramdam. Cute at funny. haha.. Gusto ko yong scene ng pagkikita nila.. Nman ang DD! i like it when he's blank, yung tipong waley talaga maintindihan.
ReplyDeleteSana more on cute scenes para naman di masyadong mamroblema ang mga readers sa mga pangyayari.. ayoko na masyadong umiyak, tas may patay2 yan pa ng bestfriend..(hahaha.. naisip ko lang uli).
Pwede rn may wacky side si DD. tas ang MM. pagpatuloy lang kakulitan nun. hmmm.. parang naiisip ko narin ang plot ng story. wag kalimutan ang twist! Alam ko marami ka nyan..ahhaha
mahaba ba ang speech?? bumabawi lang :)))
Dito si James ay pure Australian, say nyo naman! Foreigner at Filipina, bagay na bagay :D Ayiiiiie!
ReplyDeleteJan naman talaga naguumpisa yan, ang pagkamasungit ni mister at ang pagkamulit ni girl. Parang baliktad sa GV'S diba??
GO SIS! ALAM MO NAMAN SUSUSPORTAHAN KITA DIBA?
GO LANG. WE'RE ALWAYS POR YOU :)
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
ReplyDeletei love you beh!
pinabasa mo na 2 sa akin di ba? at binasa ko ulit. :D
hindi pa man sila magkakilala personal, nakakakilig pa din ayieeeee!
teka teka punta na ako sa next chapter ;)
mommy
hahahahaha. kinikilig ako sa pagsusungit ni austrilyano.hahahaha.
ReplyDeletebebe CAMSur!! kating kati no kong mabasa ang ff mo.. sige na, give up na ko sa tradisyon kong pag tapos n ang storya saka ko lang babasahin... tutal nasa akin din namn si laffy, chance ko na rin para magcomment...
ReplyDeleteat ang comment ko ay isang mahabang "wwwwwwwwwwwwwwaahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!" KThanksBye..haha
seryoso, 1st chapter p lang, kinikilig na ko... Ho May Gawd!! buang na ata ako... nakangiti ako habang nagbabasa... kasalanan mo to, haha
teka, pupunta na ko s next chapter.. dun mo na lang abangan ang next comment ko.. xxD
-ate MaeLie/thisisenLiexx (papangatawana ko na ang pangalang yan) @_@